Maps地图:

C9P30 + C13P29

Introduction - 宾语 “changes to XXX / how XXX be changed”

Body paragraph – 分段 + 语言补充 (方位描述 + 变化描述)

Overview -

body paragraphs :

方位描述 :

Be located / situated / sited ; lie / srand / sit + 介词 (in / on / to 取决于参考物之间的关系)

ps . on both side of … road

At the junction / intersecetion / crossing

On / at eastern end / tip of …(顶端)

east vs estern

变化:

新建 : be added / constructed / built ……

new …/ newly-built … (adj)

the addition of … (we can see addition of …)

以前的… original/previous/former … adj.

被移除 : be removed / be demolished ; be no longer present

A – B :

被改建 : be rebuilt / reconstructed / changed / converted + to / into …

被替代 : be replaced /

Body 1 – buildings 的变化 (accommdation , reception , restaurant)

as you can see , the island has a huge change , there are mant building have been added , at the center of the island there is a new reception , including a new restaurant is at the north of the reception. what’s more , a new pier is prepared . the most singnifcant change is two groups of accommodation are built in the west and east. Finally, there is a newly designated swim area at the beach on the western side of the island.

As you can see, the island has a significant changes. Numerous buildings have been added, including a new reception located at the center of the island. Towards the north of the reception, a new restaurant has been constructed. Additionally, a new pier has been prepared for convenience. However, the most notable changes are the construction of two groups of accommodations in the west and east areas. Finally, there is a newly designated swim area at the beach on the western side of the island.

Body2 – other facilities 的变化 (swimming / footpath ,vechicle track , pier , boat)

C13p29:

Body1 – car park 的变化

The two maps show some changes made to the car park . in 2007, … (以前的状态) However , in 2010 , …(变化)

Body2 – other facilities 的变化

the two maps also show many changes in the bus station area. in 2007, there were six Bus stop on both side of the hospital Rd , However , in 2010 , a new bus station constructed to the west of Hospital Rd . in order to relieve traffic pressure , the rode also had many changes . The basic crossroad was transformed into a belt road.